Wednesday, 25 July 2018

my holidays

 First I went to the Greymouth pools and I went down the hydro slides while my nana and my 2 cousins play in the pool.One of my cousins went down the hydro slides with me then we had races I went down the green one and he went down the  blue one.Then we swapped on the second round so I was  on the blue one and he was on the green one.Then after an hour and a half and then we got dressed then went home and watched a movie and had an ice block.
My cousins are called William and James they live  in Kamara
and my Nana lives in Punakaiki
and I  live in Blackball.
This is in Punakaiki next to my nana's house I go there for 1 week and then I go to my dads for 1 week.Then I go back home so I can go to school my dad lives in Greymouth.
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5 comments:

  1. Joshua Vilikoka9 August 2018 at 10:10

    Nice Holiday you have there Bianca. I like to say that next time when you post something to your blog please ask your teacher to check your spelling, proof read and make sure you have a Capital letter at the begin of your sentence.

    Regards,
    Joshua

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    1. Anonymous21 September 2018 at 11:44

      Hi Joshua I have checked it again and fixed it up if there are any more mistakes please tell me any way thanks for your feedback

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  2. Vivanisi9 August 2018 at 10:15

    Hi Bianca,
    my name is Viva, as you know I attend Panmure Bridge School. Wow! this sounds like a lot of fun! I can already imagine myself screaming my tears out going down the slippery slide! I go to my grandmothers house for the weekends! you must've had a fun holiday. But always remember that the i by it's self must at all time be capital. Besides that, great job on having a fun holiday.

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  3. Anonymous16 August 2018 at 09:17

    thank you

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  4. Anonymous21 September 2018 at 11:41

    Hi viva I have went back and fixed it all up if there any more mistakes please tell me and I will fix them up again anyway thanks for your feedback
    By Bianca

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Thank-you for your helpful, positive comment on my work.

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