Kia Ora Bianca, My name is Caitlyn. I am a year 8 student from Karoro School. I really like your writing about blood sugar. I haven’t really heard about blood sugar and diabetes. So it was really interesting reading your writing.
Next time I think that you could make the words a bit bigger. They are a little bit too small. I also think that you should change some of the colours because it is hard to read.
Once again I really like your writing about diabetes. In your writing you had some really good describing words. You also had some really good strong sentences. I also liked how you added a glossary to help with some of the words.
From Caitlyn If you have any spare time can you please visit my blog http://karorocaitlynh.blogspot.co.nz/
Kia Ora Bianca,
ReplyDeleteMy name is Caitlyn. I am a year 8 student from Karoro School.
I really like your writing about blood sugar. I haven’t really heard about blood sugar and diabetes. So it was really interesting reading your writing.
Next time I think that you could make the words a bit bigger. They are a little bit too small. I also think that you should change some of the colours because it is hard to read.
Once again I really like your writing about diabetes. In your writing you had some really good describing words. You also had some really good strong sentences. I also liked how you added a glossary to help with some of the words.
From Caitlyn
If you have any spare time can you please visit my blog
http://karorocaitlynh.blogspot.co.nz/