Wednesday 2 May 2018

My Narrative story about a place called Exode

I have been learning about ways to tell a story. I chose to write in the first person like I was the one in the story.

2 comments:

  1. Greetings,
    I realy enjoyed your presentation about Exode. You gave a lot of words that described your text. What I think you should change is the words you used a lot to a different word that means the same thing. Other then that you work was fantastic. Keep it up!

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  2. thank you your work is good to

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Thank-you for your helpful, positive comment on my work.