visual agnosia

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Time connective or sequencing word:

First sentence tells us what the paragraph is about

food on mars

We are learning about food on mars.

my holidays

 First I went to the Greymouth pools and I went down the hydro slides while my nana and my 2 cousins play in the pool.One of my cousins went down the hydro slides with me then we had races I went down the green one and he went down the  blue one.Then we swapped on the second round so I was  on the blue one and he was on the green one.Then after an hour and a half and then we got dressed then went home and watched a movie and had an ice block.
My cousins are called William and James they live  in Kamara
and my Nana lives in Punakaiki
and I  live in Blackball.

This is in Punakaiki next to my nana's house I go there for 1 week and then I go to my dads for 1 week.Then I go back home so I can go to school my dad lives in Greymouth.

my reading about food on mars

My Narrative story about a place called Exode

I have been learning about ways to tell a story. I chose to write in the first person like I was the one in the story.