my holidays

 First I went to the Greymouth pools and I went down the hydro slides while my nana and my 2 cousins play in the pool.One of my cousins went down the hydro slides with me then we had races I went down the green one and he went down the  blue one.Then we swapped on the second round so I was  on the blue one and he was on the green one.Then after an hour and a half and then we got dressed then went home and watched a movie and had an ice block.
My cousins are called William and James they live  in Kamara
and my Nana lives in Punakaiki
and I  live in Blackball.

This is in Punakaiki next to my nana's house I go there for 1 week and then I go to my dads for 1 week.Then I go back home so I can go to school my dad lives in Greymouth.

my reading about food on mars

My Narrative story about a place called Exode

I have been learning about ways to tell a story. I chose to write in the first person like I was the one in the story.

descriptive writting

I've been working on descriptive writing.I've tried to give a picture in the mind of the reader.

Improving Google draw

My teacher gave me feedback that my Google Drawing could be even better for a Year 6.  I used images with png at the end and they don't have stuff behind them.  Do you think it looks better?

                       1st go at google draw                                                2nd go at google draw
  

My Dangerous situation

We had to think of a dangerous situation that we could use to help us with making a Google drawing and writing. This is mine. Do you think it's dangerous?

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